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You made me brighter, everything you did.
I wouldn’t take it back to save my life.
I learned to shine while others like me hid
And laugh when someone like you twists the knife.
Eventually you saw your own mistake.
You fell to me, so desperate for my aid.
Eventually, your son was mine to make
A victim too, though never have I preyed.
Yet I still think of others you have wronged,
And ten long years have failed to change their stars.
What glowed the brightest for your mercy longed,
And now absorbs all light into its scars.
No strength of mine is worth the pain, the doubt,
The death of all the stars your words put out.
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I hope it isn't too late to enter this in the Stand up to bullying contest, which can be found here: [link]
I'd like this sonnet, based loosely on my experiences, to stand as my entry. I think I have finally figured out the volta. But I'd give it all up to save a friend...
Go enter the contest! It ends April 15th!
I'd like this sonnet, based loosely on my experiences, to stand as my entry. I think I have finally figured out the volta. But I'd give it all up to save a friend...
Go enter the contest! It ends April 15th!
Standing up to bullying contest *Date extended*
EDIT: date extended to 15th April
Contest time!!
This was inspired by this video~ Here's the http://www.youtube.com/watch?featurelayer_embedded&v=ltun92DfnPY and general stories we've heard about bullying.
The theme is "standing up to bullying"
Make something hopeful, something positive and inspiring, something that can help people out of the darkness and motivate them to live their lives
Any art medium is accepted - please don't hesitate to join!
You:What if i don't want to join?
Us::iconcomebackplz:
If you don't want to enter please spread the word about this contest,
If we get a lot of contestants the chances of better prizes will go up
If you are entering please let us know and if you want you can fav this journal. Post your entries in the comments
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Whoa, that was beautiful! I love the final stanza!